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In this dream
The red moon doesn't set
The screaming crowds of the night
Their arms growing like vines
Working as if magical
Towards the light of your voice
You seem untouched
Your purple petals dancing around your face
Watching in awe behind the spotlight colors
I'm waiting for the chance to dream with you

I love you
I can’t say it to your face
I just can't take it anymore
I tell you that I'm fine
That you can just leave, and I won’t care
But the day you sing those melodies to me
Only me
Will be the happiest day of my life

In this dream
The flowing tears have stopped
The loneliness no longer thirsts for love
Your heart dances, coming closer
Your soft hair and pale skin
Hold out your hands so I may touch them
I’ll sing your sweet serenity
Until dawn
Although I can’t see the sun
I'm waiting for the chance to wake up to you

I love you
Can you see it in my face?
I just can't take it anymore
I tell you that I'm fine
That you can just leave, and I won’t care
But the day you let me sing those melodies to you
Only you
Will be the happiest day of my life
©2008-2009 ~meibiseiya
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This is a poem I wrote about :iconnineinjections:'s two characters, Ryôhei and Raphaël. It's for her contest. I believe I fit in all the elements ^-^.

Now, to explain this for the contest:
The first two stanzas are from Raphaël's point of view. He's watching Ryôhei sing at a concert.

The last two stanzas are of course, from Ryôhei's point of view, from up on the stage.

Anyway, hope you like this Nine! I think I got their personalities right. ^^'
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I like it :3 Its cute!

Your so much better at poetry than me...D:





I was working on the proof of one of my poems all the morning, and took out a comma. In the afternoon I put it back again. - Oscar Wilde

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wah this is beautiful.... thank you so much !!!

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Your welcome! :)

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It sounds like a song.. *sways unintentionally*

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well that's good to know! Because they are supposed to be at a concert. Thanks!

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No prob! :aww::glomp: Hey, I've also written something for her, if you want to check it out then go crazy! :aww:

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I adopted a Houshou Takigawa a.k.a Monk-san chibi from The-Den Anna-chan-Kyuu's Demyx<3
I am a member of SUPER YAOI FANGIRL NINJAS, ^_^ Avvie by ~Falln-Avatars
It's beautiful, and it really does suits them :)

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Thank you :)

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You're welcome ^^

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